Today's snippet is from Impcatcher, which is now on sale on Amazon for the Kindle, and DriveThru in pdf format. A more general epub version is on its way, as is a paperback.
This snippet carries on from last week's episode. Tal is being attacked in his shop by a pair of professional killers.
The
man had a bushy beard and a fixed expression, his pale blue eyes like
flint chips. Psychotic. Deadly. He lunged – I twisted to evade the
shimmering blue of the blade and shoved a large crate into his path.
The blade caught the cheap wood, and it charred. I shivered and flung
myself back further, knowing the wooden shelves on the side wall were
within feet of me, and that I had nowhere further to run. Beardy
grinned icily, moving forward with professional caution. I risked a
glance at the shelves behind me. He lunged immediately, not entirely
to my surprise. I swung sideways and grabbed at the object I had
spotted on the shelf, flinging it round and into his face. He cried
out in pain, blood welling from each of the spikes digging into his
face. Barbed nets are vicious things, like a blanket full of
fish-hooks. I use them sparingly, only on really savage prey. Beardy
qualified.
Comments welcomed!
"A blanket full of fish-hooks" sounds vicious indeed! Great imagery :) I can't say I feel sorry for Beardy either.
ReplyDeleteYou don't need to feel sorry for Beardy - he's a nasty piece of work who makes some of Tal's imps look positively sweet.
DeleteOuch! Sounds like expensive hitman is going to need all that money for some plastic surgery...
ReplyDeleteThat's why he's expensive - he needs to pay for the damage he suffers doing the job!
DeleteTal clawed his way out at the last minute as usual.
ReplyDeleteHe's not out of the woods yet - but he's working on it.
Delete"he had a bushy beard and a fixed expression" - I like that line! Tal has home court advantage in his shop and it looks like he's using it to his advantage.
ReplyDeleteHe'd say he needs every advantage he can get.
DeleteLol 'I use them sparingly, only on really savage prey. Beardy qualified.'
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