Today's snippet is from Impcatcher, which I am aiming to publish in roughly a month's time. Tal, the eponymous impcatcher, is in a cellar, endeavouring to capture an imp which is throwing bottles of vintage wine at him.
My
current prey chortled again, sounding like a drunken rat with a sore
throat, and I heard it scramble up higher. I had a relatively good
idea approximately where it was. I hadn’t even managed to get a
look at it before the lamp went out. From the sounds it made, I was
dealing with a big specimen. Smart, too, but then most imps are. It
had flung the first bottle when I was framed in the doorway, with
nowhere to dodge. I slid my hand into the left pocket in the tough
leather of my breeches. I had a few tricks up my sleeve
(metaphorically). The pebble was cool, comforting, an old friend. I
flung it across the chamber, pretty much at random to my right, and
the tiny missile clattered noisily against glass and stone. Above me,
to my left, I heard an intake of breath. I murmured a word so quietly
that even I couldn’t hear it... and the pebble burst into vivid,
actinic blue flame.
You will have noticed three different versions of the cover on this page. I'd be very grateful for your respective views as to which of the three looks best. Yes, the red cover has the imp in a slightly different pose, just to complicate matters.
Thoughts, views, suggestions and comments are welcome!
What a waste of wine. *sighs*
ReplyDeleteThe blue's best - the imp stands out nicely against that background.
Yep, it's a waste of wine. Imps are evil like that.
DeleteFun little snippet...love the thrill of the hunt feel.
ReplyDeleteNot sure Tal would agree about the thrill of the hunt - imps are vicious little brutes!
DeleteAh - he's pinpointed the imp's location.
ReplyDeleteI prefer the bottom cover with the red background and different pose so the imp's legs are straddling the title.
I think I'd agree about the pose - more dynamic.
DeleteWhere do I get some of those stones?
ReplyDeleteRegarding the covers, may I suggest a fourth? Use the bottom cover with the red background and different pose but use the multicolored title from the top one. If that is not an option, I do prefer the bottom one as well.
Sounds like most votes are for the red cover.
DeleteCool pebble. I want one!
ReplyDeleteThe red cover has more energy and is a bit more menacing.
Yep - the red cover seems to be winning.
DeleteLove the 'sounding like a drunken rat with a sore throat...', lol.
ReplyDeleteThanks!
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