This is my snippet this
week for SFFSat. SFFSat is a
place where a number of authors post snippets from their written
works, and give the opportunity for comments, support and encouragement.
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Once again I've asked my heroine not to use such bad language, but Sorrel doesn't take any notice of what I say...
His next blow was low and
twisting, beautifully timed and controlled. Volg it, the squumer was
good! I brought my sword up, catching his motion, barely edging it
aside and leaving myself with no way to hack back. I retreated,
trying to remember where Crest's body was - the last thing I wanted
was to fall over him. Three, of course, wanted nothing else for me.
He was grinning, breathing fast, the sword moving in small circles as
he bore down upon me. And somewhere there was the other graalur - it
didn't sound as though the woman was keeping him occupied. I was in
trouble. Again.
Comments welcomed!
I'm always impressed with fight scenes where multiple assailants are at play. You handled the challenge well.
ReplyDelete:) Heidi
Thanks - the trouble is, Sorrel never picks on just one opponent.
DeleteSo the bad language was the four lettered word in the first line?? Nice snippet :)
ReplyDeleteVolg and squum - dreadful crudities, I know. She says lafquas sometimes, too. Me, I never use that sort of volging language...
DeleteThe rhythm of this is fantastic and the action and humor has continued to work in tandem so well. A fun read for sure, naughty words aside. ;)
ReplyDeleteThanks! I really appreciate the encouragement, as I'd stalled on Sorrel Snowbound (fatigue from trying to do too much) - all your comments help get me writing again.
DeleteThis is a fun read. I like the tongue-in-cheek tone and you pace it well. Sorrel had definitely captured my interest.
ReplyDeleteSorrel has a bad tendency to nick anything not nailed down. I'll try and wrest your interest away from her and give it back. ;-)
DeleteGreat snippet. Volg it - I must use that instead of the usual swear words, lol. :D
ReplyDeleteOne of my ambitions is to get "volg" into general useage - thanks!
DeleteShe seems to have a penchant for getting into trouble.
ReplyDeleteMost definitely. The purpose of a hero (of either sex) is to get into trouble and get out of it again in interesting ways.
DeleteDoes she get into trouble, or does trouble find her? Nice snippet!
ReplyDeleteNone from me this week... next time!
A bit of both - she wouldn't admit that she looks for trouble, but once trouble finds her she is very willing to fling herself into the midst of it.
DeleteI'm looking forward to seeing more of Denis next time.
Volg it! As long as swears are invented they are fine. I've had to invent a few of my own. BTW: My snippet is on my blog but alas I have forgotten to submit it this week.
ReplyDeleteMy preference is for invented oaths. Seen and enjoyed your snippet, BTW.
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