Friday 19 September 2014

SFFSat 20/9/14 - Blue Ice 5

SFFSat is a place where a number of authors post snippets from their written works, and give the opportunity for comments, support and encouragement. This is my snippet for it - please also explore the other blogs that are part of this set - you can find the information here. 

This is part five of Blue Ice. Anton deGama is in the rings of Saturn, planting bio-engineered plants on a chunk of ring ice, when his colleague Kellerman sees something blue moving on the ice. Despite all common sense, Anton moves towards it...

Anton could feel centrifugal force increasing as he got closer to the equator. This ring-chunk was nearly a kilometre long, and he was almost tiptoeing across the surface. Ahead of him, there was a crystal shimmer from the surface. A blue shimmer. Anton froze (an all-too-literal word) as he studied what he could see.

"DeGama! Get away from there, Anton! Get off the fragment! Anton! Talk to me!"

Anton could hear Kellerman punching keys, and guessed that she was disengaging from the Deep Space Observatory. He suspected that Jodrell University would not be amused at the delay in the repair works to their prime research tool. But his attention was on the two dozen cobalt blue shapes, each a metre across, moving slowly through his crop towards him. 
 
They were not anything he had ever seen before, but Anton had no doubt that they were alive.

 Next time, we find out what these things are.
As always, comments appreciated!
 

10 comments:

  1. Wonderful! First contact with aliens, I assume.

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    1. Possibly... or perhaps not. Only time will tell.

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  2. Nice build into the realization that Anton was being slowly surrounded by...something. Can't wait to find out what.

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    1. Thanks for the kind words - and next time you'll find out what, but not why.

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  3. Definitely a nail-biter...let's hope they're friendlies, but I have my doubts... ;-)

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    1. Not all alien life is friendly - some is just hungry,,,,

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  4. Kellerman seems pretty clear that these things are dangerous. Wonder how she knows...

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    1. She doesn't - but she knows anything unknown CAN be dangerous, and she's worried about Anton. She cares for him more than she normally admits. It's reciprocated, but he isn't saying so, either. Some characters need their heads knocking together...

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