tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post800358161040081206..comments2023-05-13T01:15:23.229-07:00Comments on Dragons and Triplanes: SFFSat 8/12/12Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14612014503133683333noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-44441841649908523132012-12-14T10:49:58.575-08:002012-12-14T10:49:58.575-08:00How could you possibly suggest that Sorrel is ever...How could you possibly suggest that Sorrel is ever wrong? :-) (I never say anything of the sort, for fear that she will beat me up). Thanks for the encouragement!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14612014503133683333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-59375387391280060392012-12-14T10:48:35.566-08:002012-12-14T10:48:35.566-08:00Thanks - yes, it is going to be a tough battle.Thanks - yes, it is going to be a tough battle.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14612014503133683333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-84048029442692972252012-12-14T10:48:02.318-08:002012-12-14T10:48:02.318-08:00Frustratingly for Sorrel, she never finds out - th...Frustratingly for Sorrel, she never finds out - the woman has disappeared by the time the fight is over.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14612014503133683333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-68891604362579101942012-12-14T10:47:31.850-08:002012-12-14T10:47:31.850-08:00Thanks - I'm planning to complete the sequence...Thanks - I'm planning to complete the sequence over the next few weeks, so you can see how it develops.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14612014503133683333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-21466269801536265282012-12-14T10:46:59.001-08:002012-12-14T10:46:59.001-08:00I can't shut Sorrel up. I do try, but she'...I can't shut Sorrel up. I do try, but she's more violent than I am (as demonstrated above!) ;-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14612014503133683333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-86412699952312213892012-12-14T10:46:25.367-08:002012-12-14T10:46:25.367-08:00It's why I like writing first person (I used a...It's why I like writing first person (I used always to write third person, and my text tended to be flat - I like to think Sorrel works better in this format).Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14612014503133683333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-45828270746121320282012-12-14T10:44:41.547-08:002012-12-14T10:44:41.547-08:00Graalur aren't bright enough to be tricksy - o...Graalur aren't bright enough to be tricksy - on the other hand, I could say that nor is Sorrel.<br /><br />Ow! (Sound of author being hit by character who objects to aspersions being cast at her).Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14612014503133683333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-6175344347908014712012-12-10T17:23:07.388-08:002012-12-10T17:23:07.388-08:00"I had a nasty suspicion that I was lulling h..."I had a nasty suspicion that I was lulling him into a realistic feeling of confidence."<br /><br />Love this line. I hope Sorrel is wrong about that, though! Great snippet.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-66733918086171305882012-12-09T14:01:09.947-08:002012-12-09T14:01:09.947-08:00Love the nasty suspicion.Am anticipating a gruelin...Love the nasty suspicion.Am anticipating a grueling fight.Melisse Aireshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01478569639424075550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-82395358988037667202012-12-08T18:09:58.723-08:002012-12-08T18:09:58.723-08:00Three may be just a bit harder than the first two....Three may be just a bit harder than the first two. And where has the woman gone?Sue Ann Bowlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17692320238497263942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-66417468579702474102012-12-08T15:54:25.632-08:002012-12-08T15:54:25.632-08:00You've set this fight up very well. The reader...You've set this fight up very well. The reader can see the scene very clearly. Great snippet.J.M. Blackmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12452636020480500983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-40999197226403635132012-12-08T11:11:36.389-08:002012-12-08T11:11:36.389-08:00Wow! With all the strong language in this snippet,...Wow! With all the strong language in this snippet, I am beside myself. I don't know what to say.<br /><br />All kidding aside, great snippet!Patrick Stutzmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06701695102224164322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-38740732190628219922012-12-08T06:10:52.992-08:002012-12-08T06:10:52.992-08:00I like the character name - Three. It's alway...I like the character name - Three. It's always fun to watch a character's take on a situation from first person and then have it unexpectedly change. Great snippet.S.A. Checkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04682239850626207822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-48731496050297862622012-12-08T04:26:16.053-08:002012-12-08T04:26:16.053-08:00Or maybe Three is pretending to be lulled into ove...Or maybe Three is pretending to be lulled into overconfidence...tricky, tricky!T. M. Hunterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04315726033990784930noreply@blogger.com