tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post346381983233162759..comments2023-05-13T01:15:23.229-07:00Comments on Dragons and Triplanes: SFFSat 2/3/13Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14612014503133683333noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-72353839527908656542013-03-04T11:13:14.154-08:002013-03-04T11:13:14.154-08:00Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14612014503133683333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-66809996244875634692013-03-04T11:12:41.970-08:002013-03-04T11:12:41.970-08:00The danger of the sequel! Wrack is the dragon, and...The danger of the sequel! Wrack is the dragon, and he is Sorrel's lover (when in human form) - all material from the first volume. But I wante dto throw the reader immediately into the action - I'm glad it seems to have worked.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14612014503133683333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-18279497277127384742013-03-04T11:11:11.587-08:002013-03-04T11:11:11.587-08:00I was nervous about writing it this way, so I'...I was nervous about writing it this way, so I'm really glad it works - thanks for the vote of confidence!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14612014503133683333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-15699669828240741912013-03-04T11:10:30.338-08:002013-03-04T11:10:30.338-08:00When Sorrel's around, things usually get worse...When Sorrel's around, things usually get worse. Of course, that's the job of a hero - to get into deep trouble and to get out of it in interesting ways.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14612014503133683333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-50955016249192952802013-03-04T11:09:58.075-08:002013-03-04T11:09:58.075-08:00They can flee... but whether Sorrel will thank the...They can flee... but whether Sorrel will thank them for it is another matter.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14612014503133683333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-25835532715984717652013-03-04T11:09:16.895-08:002013-03-04T11:09:16.895-08:00Wrack is a dragon... and also (when in human form)...Wrack is a dragon... and also (when in human form) Sorrel's lover. Which is why she is not a happy bunny...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14612014503133683333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-44530661716621701012013-03-04T11:08:16.061-08:002013-03-04T11:08:16.061-08:00Start with a bang, that's my usual approach!Start with a bang, that's my usual approach!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14612014503133683333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-11540822933976445472013-03-04T11:07:59.862-08:002013-03-04T11:07:59.862-08:00Sorrel gets frustrated and irritable very easily.....Sorrel gets frustrated and irritable very easily...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14612014503133683333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-31627311863719801612013-03-04T11:07:36.809-08:002013-03-04T11:07:36.809-08:00Thanks - got some way to go at the moment, but wat...Thanks - got some way to go at the moment, but watch this space.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14612014503133683333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-2124941724974163472013-03-04T11:07:17.568-08:002013-03-04T11:07:17.568-08:00Thanks!Thanks!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14612014503133683333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-14753895029592914292013-03-03T20:02:41.077-08:002013-03-03T20:02:41.077-08:00Wow, that was really intense for such a short snip...Wow, that was really intense for such a short snippet. I love how you keep the energy high while slipping in detailed imagery. Great job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-68991534729233925842013-03-03T10:21:30.195-08:002013-03-03T10:21:30.195-08:00"And that was why I was screaming."
Lov..."And that was why I was screaming."<br /><br />Loved this. The beginning draws me right in and plops wonderful questions at my feet. Why is the dragon being gone an issue? Who is invading? Who is Wrack?<br /><br />Nicely done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-49170954701356197872013-03-02T15:14:10.760-08:002013-03-02T15:14:10.760-08:00This was awesome. I second S A's comment about...This was awesome. I second S A's comment about being thrown right nto the mix of things.<br /><br />I like how we started it with a scream and then we find out that it was the narrator screaming. It was just assumed that it was someone else, but to find out that it was the main character adds a different layer to it all. Good job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-9087175318261001892013-03-02T10:40:27.776-08:002013-03-02T10:40:27.776-08:00A breakdown of the wall can only mean one thing: i...A breakdown of the wall can only mean one thing: invasion. Why do I get the feeling that things are going to get worse?Patrick Stutzmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06701695102224164322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-44658234808556247812013-03-02T10:27:28.027-08:002013-03-02T10:27:28.027-08:00Is there anywhere they can flee to? and who is Wra...Is there anywhere they can flee to? and who is Wrack?Sue Ann Bowlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17692320238497263942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-44909404118482639882013-03-02T10:11:53.496-08:002013-03-02T10:11:53.496-08:00I could feel the anxiety and despair. Good work! N...I could feel the anxiety and despair. Good work! Now I'm dying to know who Wrack is.T. M. Cronehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05338638211913479462noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-12013866628741321952013-03-02T10:10:28.259-08:002013-03-02T10:10:28.259-08:00This comment has been removed by the author.T. M. Cronehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05338638211913479462noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-67459128051170035412013-03-02T08:12:31.729-08:002013-03-02T08:12:31.729-08:00I always enjoy getting thrown right into the mix a...I always enjoy getting thrown right into the mix and having it explained as we go. What a cool place to get us started - fleeing a city under attack. Looking forward to seeing more. S.A. Checkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04682239850626207822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-61111210638549461652013-03-02T07:35:23.396-08:002013-03-02T07:35:23.396-08:00Wonderful description and pace to this snippet. Th...Wonderful description and pace to this snippet. The frustration of your character comes across extremely clear.J.M. Blackmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12452636020480500983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-78093537068671900142013-03-02T07:13:17.325-08:002013-03-02T07:13:17.325-08:00Oh noooo!! This is exciting!! Love the imagery in ...Oh noooo!! This is exciting!! Love the imagery in this and the tension. Good luck with the release!!TK Toppinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00192845664117376346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555960310987201510.post-23759347028714635392013-03-02T07:08:09.279-08:002013-03-02T07:08:09.279-08:00Noooo!! Nice twist!Noooo!! Nice twist!JC Casselshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12359245589507445547noreply@blogger.com